Did this story a looooooooooooongggggg time ago. So just decided to put the first chapter in.
There will be a story on my trip to Cameron Highland soon.
Chapter 1
The train heading towards Seremban was late.
Sharifah looked at her watch, 10.00 o’clock . She bit her lips. There were fewer people on the platform. The Pelabuhan Klang
train had passed twice and still there were no sign of the her train.
It was almost 10.15 when the train came into the station.
Sharifah perked up when she saw it was the train with the two row seats. Two row seat means more place to sit and more
privacy. Perfect to snuggle and get some shut eye on her one hour and a half
trip back to Seremban. Sharifah made her way through the aisle. There was no one in her carriage except for the Malay
couples at the back row. They were giggling and holding each other as if their seats were not big enough to
accommodate them both. Sharifah settled down on her seat and hugged her
knapsack to keep her warm from the cold temperature in the commuter. Before she
knew it she had dozed off…
Sharifah opened
her eyes groggily. The train had stopped. What station was it? She looked out of
the window and saw that a lot of people had gotten off the train. Still groggy,
Sharifah sat straight on her seat. Slowly she stood up and searched for the
couple at the back row. They were gone!
‘Calm down, Sharifah, probably they had gone
down on the earlier stop’, Sharifah tried to rationalize. Sharifah could
see more people disembarking the train .Her eyes darted to the door. It was
closed! Why was her door closed ?Sharifah felt all her blood had drained. Her
heart was thumping so hard she felt that she could hear it echoing throughout
the carriage. She was rooted to the spot as the dreadful truth crept up to her.
She was all alone in the locked train and nobody saw her! She tried to force
herself to move and was about to rush towards the door when Sharifah noticed
the young man sleeping peacefully behind her. That was when the lights went
out…..
“This is
bad,”said Sharifah to herself. The young man stirred and woke up. He rubbed his
eyes and looked at Sharifah, dazed and confused. He jumped up when the train
started to move again. Sharifah shouted and hit at the window trying to get the
attention of the passengers remaining on the platform. They were too engrossed
on their own activity that they didn’t see the two people inside.
The train came to a stop at a gravel track.
Sharifah slowly edged away from the strange, big yet,
attractively handsome man. The young man was too busy trying to pry the door
open to notice this. It was useless!. Without electricity in their carriage,
the door was securely locked! He started
beating on the door and shouting as loud as he could ,terrifying Sharifah even
more. She was nearly in tears.
Here she was in a
dark train with a total stranger, a man; no least and twice her size. Horror
images came into her mind, news paper clippings appeared with stories :
GIRL FOUND STIFF IN SEREMBAN!
Nobody saw them…..
anything could happen in the train…….
The man lay his head on the glass window pane in
frustration. His breath was heavy, fogging the window as he exhaled. He felt
her presence near him and he looked at her. His face was half hidden by the
dark. She didn’t know what he was thinking and panicked when his body turned
towards her.
Sharifah was shaking all over. She was hugging her knapsack,
her left hand dig into it trying to find the black pepper spray she kept in the
bag. The man walked towards her. Sharifah panicked and stepped a couple meters
back , her hand frantically searching for the spray. Where was it? Her finger
found something flat and sticky and melting. Sharifah pulled out her hand. She
cursed herself, as she had forgotten to eat the half uneaten Cadbury chocolate
bar she bought that afternoon. Her hand was smudgy. At least she could smudge
the man’s face and blind him with rich chocolate goodness!
The man was coming closer and he was breathing heavily.
Sharifah yelped and turned 180 degrees and ran. There was a sliding door at the
end of the carriage which leads to the other carriage. She tried to pull the
door open but her body was shaking badly, pull as she might the door only slid
open an inch. Her hands had turned jelly. Sharifah gasped and let go of the door.
It closed with a loud THUMP! She could feel her heart thumping harder. She was
so scared. She could feel him breathing behind her neck. Sharifah closed her
eyes, trying in vain to control her body from shaking.
What should she do, what should
she do?
Her mind was trying
to find a way but her body was frozen with fear. She did what anyone would have
done in a dyer situation …..cry!
She cried and sniffle and sob, while still backing the
door. The man was startled and stopped in his track. He seemed baffle at first
and then he grab both Sharifah’s shoulder, which caused her to cry even louder!
MAK!
Sharifah was too busy crying to notice that he had pushed
her aside. The man turned his back towards her and tried to pull the door open.
Sharifah’s tears subsided and she was starting to have the case of hiccups. The
man managed to open the door and held it so that it wouldn’t slide shut. He
looked at her and raised an eyebrow as if saying, ‘Are you coming?’ Feeling
stupid and still having the case of hiccups she followed the man into the other
carriage and rushed to the sliding door at the far end. The door was heavier
this time and the man was breathing heavily when he opened the door for her.
She passed him as he held the door open and could see his tired face. By the
time they reached the other sliding door, the young man could barely open it.
He slid down to the floor leaning on the sliding door. He wiped the sweat on
his forehead. Sharifah looked at him and looked through the window pane on the
door. She could see the driver’s cabin door on the other side of the next
carriage; it was open. They were almost there! Sharifah put down her knapsack .
SHE was not going to be locked in the train with a man, no matter whether he was good or
bad. Anybody who would find them the next morning would assume that they had
slept together in the train. Who cares whether they were innocent or not.
People will only say what they what want to say. Sharifah could see the
headlines now.
‘UITM STUDENT CAUGHT IN JAINS (Jabatan Agama Islam Negeri
Sembilan) RAIDE WITH A MAN IN A DESERTED COMMUTER TRAIN.’
Oh no ! She was not going to let
that happen!
She pulled the door as hard as she could but it didn’t
budge. She tried again, her hand was wet from the sweat she had drawn out from
her earlier fright. She pulled with all her strength, leaning her body sideways
to the left so that all her body weight was used to pull the door open. Her
hand slipped from the door handle and she fell…..on top of the young man. He
groaned in pain, Sharifah had fallen on top of his stomach. He looked up at
Sharifah, his face twisted in pain. Sharifah tried to get up but was mesmerized
by his eyes. Talk about cheesy in a bad situation! That close, she could see
that it was hazel brown in color and although his face was twisted in
pain, she could sense that there was
sadness in them.
The young man groaned again, this time a little louder.
Realizing her position, Sharifah struggled to get up. She held out her hand to
help the man up but he brushed it away and painfully got to his feet. Feeling
foolish, Sharifah brushed her wet hands on her t-shirt and tried again to open
the door. The door opened a bit. Sharifah pulled again and suddenly she felt a
big hand on top of her left hand and felt a crushing pain as it put force on
her small hand as they pulled the door open. Together they managed to pull the
sliding door wide open. Sharifah’s hand was throbbing with pain and she looked
up at the man to see whether he did it on purpose to get back at her but she
didn’t get any expression on his face. He let go of her hand and merely walked
passed her to the open cabin door at the other side of the carriage. Sharifah
felt a little hurt. Massaging her left hand, she followed solemnly behind him.
She stepped into the cabin and saw that the man had already jumped out through
the drivers exit door. She couldn’t believe that the arrogant man had just left
her ! Sharifah went to the door and looked out. It was a sheer 2 meters drop on
the rail track. There were a lot of sharp small rocks below. Sharifah walked to
the edge and sat down. She felt that she had a better chance of not injuring
herself if she pushed herself off the edge sitting down then standing up!
Sharifah looked down at the track. It seemed so far down.
‘Here goes nothing,’ said Sharifah under her breath and pushed herself off the
edge. She fell on her feet but lost her footing and tumbled forward. She would
have landed face first on the track if it was not for a pair of hands that managed to grab both her arms on time.
The hands pulled her back and Sharifah turned to see the man smiling arrogantly
at her as if saying ‘No, no, no need to thank me.’ Sharifah felt her face go
red and would have walked a way until both of them realized that he was still
holding on to her arm. The man let go of her arm and turned his back towards her. He started
walking along the railway track, with a sheepish Sharifah trailing behind. The
man ignored Sharifah and whistled all the way to the platform.
There were a few
people left on the platform and they were eyeing both Sharifah and the young
man suspiciously. Sharifah glanced at her watch and saw that it was a quarter
to one. Her dad was going to kill her! Sharifah looked at the young man who was
far in front of her. What an arrogant person, thought Sharifah. Not once did he
look behind to see whether she was alright. Thank goodness they were not going
to see each other again!
It was when they
had gotten through the ticket slot that the young man called out to her, it
wasn’t actually a call, it sounded like a high pitch squeaky sound that school
boys used to get a girls attention. Rat call? Sharifah turned to look at him.
He was leaning against a pillar with both of his hands in his pants pocket. He
gave her a smirk
“Can I have your
number?” asked the young man.
“Huh?” asked
Sharifah sleepily. Their whole adventure had worn her down and she was still
upset on the hand crushing adventure.
“Your phone
number, ” said the young man. The first thing that came into her head was ,
why? But Sharifah searched through her
school beg anyway and managed to find a
piece of paper and a pen. She scribbled her number on the piece of paper and
handed it to him.
“Thank you,” he
said and held out his hand. Sharifah looked at it at first as if not knowing
what to do. He gave a warm genuine smile, his hand still stretch in front of
him. Sharifah took his hand. His big hand was warm and he squeezed her hand
gently. Sharifah looked up at his face. She saw a glint of sadness that she had
seen earlier in the train. It seemed so strange to Sharifah. One minute he was
being friendly, the next minute his whole demeanor changed, he let go of her
hand and put both hands in his pocket. He stepped back, nodded towards her and
walked off as if being friendly towards her was a forced courtesy and that it
was time to go. Sharifah watched his back a he walked off.
“What a strange man,” said Sharifah.
She knew that he would never call her, what was the point of asking?
She was right though…..He never did call…..
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A young man in a white coat picked up the chart placed at
the foot of the patient’s bed. He studied it carefully. On the top of the chart
was the patient’s name Rafiq bin Abdul Halim. It also stated his address and
I/C number. The patient was only 25 years old. The doctor skimmed though the
chart. All of his vital signs were normal; the patient’s blood pressure was
down to normal rate, 120/80. When he first entered the hospital his hip bone
was shattered, they had to reconstruct an artificial bone and support it with
steel pins. The operation had taken about 3 hours. The doctors were unable to
know the full result of the surgery with Rafiq still in a coma. They instructed
the nurses to massage and exercise the leg every morning by gently bending the
leg and slowly push the hip towards the chest, repeatedly. There was nothing
else they could do except monitor his progress and make him comfortable. The
young doctor frowned. He should have woken up, it had been 6 weeks, and there
was no detection of brain damage or
brain hemorrhage. CT scan didn’t show
anything abnormal. The doctor scratched his head and looked at his patient.
“ Why won’t you
wake up?”